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A Midsummer Night’s Dream by Shakespeare Basic Notes

A Midsummer Night’s Dream by Shakespeare Basic Notes for students in Years 9 & 10 in the Victorian Curriculum studying English as an Introduction to Shakespeare.

All reference page numbers are from the Oxford School Shakespeare Edition of ‘A Midsummer Night’s Dream’

Background Information

The play was written in 1595-96 and published in 1600, a time which was characterised by tumultuous and radical change, artistic genius, and renewed focus on the humanities. Shakespeare was submerged in the zeitgeist [spirit of the times] of the Renaissance Era which lasted between 1400-1600. As a result, Shakespeare’s play reflects some topical Renaissance ideals and concerns, such as the pursuit of truth in our humanity, which is shown in the play. The play was also performed at the time when Queen Elizabeth 1 was on the throne and she had requested Shakespeare’s company to perform it at her court not long before her death in March of 1603.

Humanism

Humanism was a philosophy that is celebrated in the play celebrating free agency and critical thinking of humans as opposed to blind faith in religion. The play can be considered a humanist text as the trials and tribulations that the characters face demonstrates the struggle between the irrational and rational, which gives rise to our human experience. Shakespeare celebrates humanist ideals in the play as the foolishness of each character highlights the destructive consequences of thinking illogically and the impact it can have on their pursuits for love and meaning.

Feminist Reading

A feminist reading of the play adds another layer to the male characters, especially Theseus, Egeus and Oberon and seeks the meaning about gender of the female characters Hippolyta, Hermia, Helena, and Titania that were portrayed at the time. The play can be interpreted as a commentary on patriarchal structures and women’s agency exploring how women navigate societal expectations and patriarchal control while showcasing moments of female defiance and strength. The characters of Hermia and Helena, demonstrate struggles and choices related to marriage, love, and societal pressures, prompting reflections of female empowerment and the limitations imposed by patriarchal norms.

On the other hand, the fact that Hippolyta does not say much in the play is the embodiment of the effects of the patriarchy which silences her and does not give her a chance to challenge Theseus claim that although he won her in battle, he will marry her with “pomp, with triumph and with revelling” (Act 1 Scene 1 p.1). Hippolyta’s silence also reflects her internal struggles with male dominance and potentially her unhappiness with the forced marriage to Theseus, as she comes from Amazonian women-warriors, who despised men and refused to marry them.

Titania is Queen of the Fairies and married to Oberon. While she is a strong willed and independent woman, she is willing to fight Oberon for control of the changeling Indian boy, she is also powerful because her fight with Oberon causes nature to act strangely. However, in terms of gender she is also manipulated by Oberon’s jealousy or humiliation and is not immune to the power of the magic flower.

The play’s ending with the couples all reconciled can be seen as either a celebration of love and acceptance, or a return to patriarchal control, depending on the interpretation.

About the Play

A civilised society

The play begins and ends in Athens at Duke Theseus’s palace. It is a civilised society in which every man knows his place from the Duke whose function it is to administer law and justice to the humblest workman who must take care not to offend the ladies. This is where we first meet the human characters Theseus and Hippolyta who are awaiting their wedding day, the four young lovers Hermia and Lysander, Helena, and Demetrius, who have already got their relationships in a tangle, the workmen who have begun a plan to perform a play far more adventurous than anything they have undertaken before.

Into the forest

Theseus and Hippolyta remain in Athens whilst the audience accompany the lovers and the workmen on their separate expeditions outside the city walls and into the forest that surrounds Athens. The forest belongs to the fairies, and Athenian law does not operate here. Oberon the fairy king, tries to impose some kind of rule, but he is not a god and makes mistakes. The first scene in the forest shows us the fairies at their best and at their worst. At their best they are caring for the wild flowers, at their worst they are quarrelling furiously, and their quarrels have serious repercussions in the lives of the human beings.

Midsummer Madness

The lovers and the workmen enter the fairy realm and soon become aware of the strangeness of their surroundings. It is a strangeness that grows more frightening as night approaches, and although most of the workmen manage to escape, the lovers become more deeply embroiled in their own problems, until, quite exhausted, they lie down to sleep, feeling alone and afraid. The time spent in the forest is the period immediately before Theseus’s wedding, which has been arranged so that “the moon, like to a silver bow / New bent in heaven, shall behold the night / Of our solemnities” (Act 1, Scene 1 p.1). Before a new moon is seen, the only night light comes from the stars and even they are “overcast” when Oberon orders Puck to mislead the quarrelling lovers, he commands Puck to “overcast the night”, specifically he instructs Puck to cover the sky “With drooping fog as black as Acheron” and lead the lovers astray, preventing them from fighting (Act 3, Scene 2 p.52). While the night is dark, it is very short, the shortest night of the year. In England, the night before midsummer day has always been associated with magic, fairies, and lovers. It is also a time for madness, and the phrase “midsummer madness” is used to describe a state of mind which is abnormal but does not last long.

A return to order

Light dawns when Theseus and Hippolyta come out of the city in order to pay some kind of homage to the midsummer season. Slowly the lovers recover from their temporary “madness” and everyone returns to Athens and civilisation, where the play ends with three weddings, a triple celebration of this civilisation. Without an ordered society, marriage is impossible, and every wedding, every permanent bond between two people, strengthens the society in which it occurs. Finally, it is the turn of the fairies to enter “foreign territory”, they come from the wood to the palace in order to bless the three marriages within the play.

Leading Characters in the Play

The royals = Theseus Duke of Athens and Hippolyta Queen of the Amazons betrothed to Theseus

The lovers = Hermia and Lysander / Helena and Demetrius

A nobleman = Egeus Hermia’s father

Master of the Revels = Philostrate

The workmen/mechanicals = Peter Quince / Nick Bottom / Francis Flute / Tom Snout / Robin Starveling / Snug

The fairies = Oberon King of the Fairies / Titania Queen of the Fairies = A Fairy attending Titania / fairy attendants Peaseblossom / Cobweb / Moth / Mustardseed

Puck = also called Robin Goodfellow is a mischievous fairy who controls the magic love flower potion to transform the lovers

Synopsis of the Acts/Scenes

Act 1

Scene 1 = Thesus passes judgement on Hermia, who refuses to marry Demetrius as ordered by her father Egeus. Hermia agrees to run away with Lysander who she loves. They confide in Helena, a close friend of Hermia, who is already in love with Demetrius, but he does not love her, he loves Hermia.

Scene 2 = Some Athenian workmen plan to produce a play for the wedding day of Duke Theseus.

Act 2

Scene 1 = Oberon Fairy King and Titania Fairy Queen are quarrelling, but the king sends Puck to fetch a magic flower, which will also help Helena to secure the love of Demetrius.

Scene 2 = Oberson sprinkles magic juice on Titania’s eyes, Puck mistakes Lysander for Demetrius and anoints his eyes so that he falls in love with Helena. Hermia is left alone in the forest.

Act 3

Scene 1 = The workmen meet in the forest but Puck interrupts their rehearsal puts a false asses head on Bottom and leads him to Titania, who when awakes from the magic juice, falls in love with him.

Scene 2 = Oberon discovers Puck’s mistake and tries to correct it by sprinkling the magic juice on Demetrius eyes. Now Helena thinks she is being mocked by Hermia and the two men. Oberon orders Puck to keep the rivals apart until the situation can be remedied.

Act 4

Scene 1 = Bottom teases the fairies and falls asleep. Oberon takes the spell of Titania’s eyes and all the fairies depart, leaving the lovers to be woken up by Theseus. Finally Bottom wakes up thinking he has had a huge dream.

Scene 2 = Bottom returns to Athens and the workmen prepare to go to the palace to perform their play Pyramus and Thisbe.

Act 5

Scene 1 = After the weddings of Theseus and Hippolyta and the four lovers, they all watch the performance of the play Pyramus and Thisbe before going to bed. When the mortals have retired, the fairies return to the palace to bless the marriages.

THEMES
lovelove as transformativelove as negative
happinesshumanitydreams
theatregenderjealousy
transformationillusion & imaginationreality
SYMBOLS
Marriage = unity & harmonyThe moon = time / waiting / change / secrecy of the forest / madnessMerchant ships = male authority
Painted maypole = phallic sexual symbolDreams = fantasy holds up a mirror to realityMagic = reinforces inexplicable powers of love
Midsummer madness = night before midsummer associated with fairies, magic & loversMadness = state of mind which is abnormalContrast between the natural and artificial world
Roses = female sexuality and fertilityThe woods/forest = untamed and wild world / confusion & misdirectionAthens = ordered world / law and order
Flowers = the magic flower used for the love potion, embodies a specific kind of magic & its disruptive effects & unpredictability of loveEyes & vision = relating to characters perception of the world in different ways leading to conflict and unreliable nature of sightJealousy = affects the humans and fairy realms leading to conflict and misunderstandings
Social standing = societal constraints & expectations placed upon women, in relation to marriage and choicePlay within a Play = the mechanicals performance with its comedic ineptitude provides a humorous commentary on the melodramatic Athenian lovers and the theme of illusion & realityNick Bottom = embodies both human and animal, the natural and the civilised, the carnal and the spiritual
Contrasts = the whole play is constructed around groups of opposites and doubles to serve as important differences between characters and the 2 different worlds that accentuates the extraordinary

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Sunset Boulevard Context the World Outside the Text

This Resource is for students in Year 12 studying ‘Sunset Boulevard’ Film Directed by Billy Wilder in AOS1: Unit 3, Reading & Responding to Texts, Analytical Text Response, in the Victorian VCE 2025 Mainstream English Curriculum

The Year 12 Study Guide for Analytical Texts – Context in Which a Text is Created and Read

Consider the ways in which meaning is affected by the contexts in which a text is created and read. The readers historical context shapes their response to and interpretation of a text. An Analytical text response therefore must demonstrate a close knowledge of the ‘world of the text’ that is the world literally outside the text. The ‘world of the text’ puts emphasis on historical, religious, racial, gender, social values, cultural values, attitudes, and behaviours of the period of time the text is based on.

What does the ‘World of the Text’ Look Like?

America in the 1950’s

Post-war America had entered into a period of unprecedented economic prosperity. It was a time of fiscal growth – driven by a number of factors including the rapidly developing car industry and a housing boom – increased consumerism and employment opportunities. The film industry was booming despite a repressive political climate.

HUAC Committee to Counter Communism

Politically the 1950’s was a deeply conservative decade, dominated by the Cold War and fear of communism. The House Un-American Activities Committee (HUAC) had been established to counter the communist ‘menace’ and intensified its efforts to flush out and vilify those viewed as a threat to the American way of life. A purge ensued that divided and damaged Hollywood. Right wingers testified against friends and colleagues, while directors and actors who were suspected of communist affiliations were targeted by the HUAC and blacklisted. Wilder had experienced Nazi Germany and was opposed to the overreach of the HUAC. He supported Hollywood professionals who had been targeted by the HUAC and refused to endorse the oath of allegiance proposed by the Screen Directors Guild.

Conservative 1950’s Gender Roles

In the 1950’s gender roles were clearly delineated and society was extremely conservative. Women were largely dependent on men, economically and socially. Although Hollywood was one of the few contexts in which women could have careers as actresses, all the power structures in the film were invested in men. Society was patriarchal and this male-dominated hierarchy did not start to change until the late 1960’s with the advent of the feminist movement.

How does the Context of 1950’s America Influence Sunset Boulevard?

The Film Noir Conventions in Sunset Boulevard

  • Noir films explore the underbelly of the human experience = Showcases a bleak, nihilistic world of moral corruption and human fallibility. Anti-hero protagonist – Joe Gillis – talented but disillusioned scriptwriter – becomes Norma’s gigolo – toy boy lover bought and sold by aging actress – has the ‘perfect’ Hollywood lifestyle of endless champagne and caviar, expensive clothes, but it’s a cliché he hates it because he has to sell his soul – “The poor dope, he always wanted a pool. Well, he got one but the price turned out to be a little high”.
  • Typically gloomy, oppressive settings, shadowy lighting shot in black & white to contribute to the ambience of brooding menace = The darkness of Sunset Boulevard reflected the disenchantment of the times. Pessimism and disillusionment became increasingly present in the American psyche due to the Cold War, the looming threat of atomic war, Communism “Red Scare” all manifested in a collective sense of uncertainty and paranoid behaviour. The corrupt and claustrophobic world of film noir embodied these fears.
  • Characters are alienated = Operate in their own bubbles rarely wanting to intersect with the outside world = in particular Norma’s reclusive lifestyle means that she seldom leaves the house, let alone Hollywood – she is tormented by her use by date – we first see Norma in the distance behind blinds with dark sunglasses covering her eyes – hence indicating both her imprisonment within her horror house and her distorted vision of the world outside. Furthermore, Wilder relates the bygone greatness of her glory days in Hollywood to a horror-inspiring confinement to the past and blindness.
  • Femme fatale = Norma Desmond – a grandiose dame who emasculates her male victims – juxtaposed with ‘Salome’ Biblical figure who has John the Baptist beheaded. Norma’s cigarette holder with a clip entraps her unsuspecting victims
  • The macabre = The chimpanzee’s macabre funeral with Norma grotesquely absorbed in the dead pet with one comic companion turning into one long nightmare for Joe – Joe recounts a disturbing dream of a monkey dancing for pennies – in a Freudian context the film noir element has alarming nightmares – for Joe he is foreshadowing his own dancing for $500 per week entrapped by Norma and his potential death – the paranoia of the 1950’s suggests the doomed ending for people under the threat of the atomic bomb
  • Tight concise dialogue = Use of flashbacks & voice over narrative of a dead man – Joe’s dialogue is cynical, disillusioned, and pessimistic – “Just a movie writer with a couple of B pictures to his credit”
  • High contrast lighting = Chiaroscuro style lighting using special placement of spotlights – juxtaposition between light and dark – film drenches dramatic moments in atmosphere – emphasises shadow and light to create dramatic tension. The darkness of the film also reflected the disenchantment of the times.

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  • Sunset Boulevard film by Director Billy Wilder
  • Oedipus the King play by Sophocles
  • Chronicle of a Death Foretold novel by Gabriel Garcia Marquez
  • My Brilliant Career novel by Miles Franklin
  • Twelfth Night play by William Shakespeare
  • We Have Always Lived in the Castle novel by Shirley Jackson
  • The Memory Police novel by Yoko Ogawa
  • Go Went Gone novel by Jenny Erpenbeck
  • Bad Dreams short stories by Tessa Hadley
  • False Claims of Colonial Thieves poetry by Kinsella & Papertalk Green

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VCE Year 12 Mainstream English Texts for 2025

For Year 12 Mainstream English in 2025 I am teaching some of the selected texts from the VCAA Lists 1 & 2. I am NOT teaching every text on the 2 lists.

All Classes are online using Zoom

Check out my website for Year 11 and Year 12 Resources @ https://englishtutorlessons.com.au

The texts I will be teaching for Section A in the 2025 Exam:

  • Sunset Boulevard film by Director Billy Wilder
  • Oedipus the King play by Sophocles
  • Chronicle of a Death Foretold novel by Gabriel Garcia Marquez
  • My Brilliant Career novel by Miles Franklin
  • Twelfth Night play by William Shakespeare
  • We Have Always Lived in the Castle novel by Shirley Jackson
  • The Memory Police novel by Yoko Ogawa
  • Go Went Gone novel by Jenny Erpenbeck
  • Bad Dreams short stories by Tessa Hadley
  • False Claims of Colonial Thieves poetry by Kinsella & Papertalk Green

The Frameworks I will be teaching for Section B in the 2025 Exam:

  • Protest
  • Personal Journeys
  • Play

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Sentence Starters & Other Useful Words for Analytical Essays

This Resource is for Mainstream English Year 12 Students writing Analytical Essays for Reading and Responding to Texts AOS1 Units 3 & 4 in the SAC and VCE English Exam Section A.

It is a good idea to vary the type of words you use to write an analytical essay for Section A in the VCE English Exam. Below are helpful ways to introduce your essays, body paragraphs, conclusions and other alternative words so that your essay flows with a higher level metalanguage.

To introduce
This essay discusses … … is explored … … is defined …
The definition of … will be given … is briefly outlined … … is explored …
The issue focused on …. … is demonstrated … … is included …
In this essay ….. … is explained … … are identified …
The key aspect discussed … … are presented … … is justified …
Views on …. range from …. … is evaluated … … is examined …
The central theme … … is described … … is analysed …
Emphasised are … … is explained and illustrated with examples …  

Introduction Starters Lines
In (title), (author) explores the idea of (theme/idea) through (technique/character/setting) (title) by (author) contends/argues/suggests that
Set in … (title) examines/explores/questions
The central idea of (concept/idea) is the tension/conflict between
At the centre of (title) is the tension/conflict between
The viewpoint/perspective of (character) reveals to the reader/audience that
Throughout (title), (author) utilises/exploits/employs (technique) in order to (character) embodies the qualities of … through their (character) demonstrates this idea/these values by
Similar/opposing qualities are displayed by (character) who
The relationship between (character) and (character) can be seen as representing the tension between While the actions of most of the characters suggest that … the behaviour of (character) demonstrates The journey/transformation from … to … highlights the values of
Ultimately (title) highlights/reveals/exposes  

Body Paragraphs
As shown by (textual evidence), (what the textual evidence suggests or implies)
This is significant/revealing because …
Furthermore/Moreover, (textual evidence) also supports the idea that …
In contrast/However, (textual evidence) implies/reveals that …
Although, (counterargument), (argument)
The sense of … pervades the opening of the text, suggesting that …
The image/motif of … symbolises the idea of …
It is at this point that the tension between … and … becomes explicit, showing the need for …
This is seen most clearly when …, highlighting …      

Body Paragraphs to explain effects of language
affects / illustrates / reinforces / characterises / impacts on / reveals / demonstrates / implies / subverts / exemplifies / portrays / underscores  

To conclude
In summary, … To review, … In conclusion, …
In brief, … To summarise, … To sum up, …
To conclude, … Thus, it is evident that … Hence, …
It has been shown that, … In short, … Therefore, …
As a result, … In light of … Consequently, …
Clearly, … On the whole,… This demonstrates …
Finally, … Overall … Given these points …
Ultimately, … The evidence supports … Taken together …
In conclusion, it is clear that (restate contention)
Overall, the evidence supports the idea that (contention)
Given these points, it is evident that …
Taken together, the arguments presented demonstrate that …
Thus, it is evident that … 

Alternatives to presents
conveys / explores / implies / demonstrates / illustrates / indicates / signals / suggests        

Alternatives to presents positively
advocates / endorses / promotes / recommends / supports

Alternatives to presents negatively
challenges / condemns / critiques / exposes / questions

To compare and contrast
Similarly, … In the same way … Likewise, …
In comparison … Complementary to this … Then again, …
However, … This is in contrast to … In contrast, …
And yet … Nevertheless, … Conversely, …
On the contrary, … On the other hand, … Notwithstanding …
Whereas … In contrast to … That aside, …
While this is the case … … disputes … Despite this, …        

To add ideas
Also, … Equally important … Subsequently, …
Furthermore, … Moreover, … As well as ….
Next… Another essential point… Additionally, …
More importantly, … In the same way … Another …
Then, … In addition, … Besides, … Then again, …
Firstly, … secondly, … thirdly, … finally, … To elaborate, …  

To present uncommon or rare ideas
Seldom … Few … Not many …
A few … … is uncommon … is scarce …
Rarely … … is rare … … is unusual …  

To present common or widespread ideas
Numerous … Many … More than …
Several … Almost all … The majority …
Most … Commonly … Significant … …
Is prevalent … is usual … Usually …  

To present inconclusive ideas
Perhaps … may be … … might be …
There is limited evidence for … … is debated … … is possibly …
Could … may include …    

To give examples
For example, … … as can be seen in … … supports …
An illustration of … … as demonstrated by … … is observed …
Specifically, … is shown … exemplifies …
Such as … As an example … To illustrate, …
For instance, …      

To show relationships or outcome
Therefore … As a result … For that reason …
Hence, … Otherwise, … Consequently, …
The evidence suggests/shows … It can be seen that … With regard to …
After examining …. These factors contribute to … It is apparent that …
Considering … it can be concluded … Subsequently, …. The effect is …
The outcome is … The result … The correlation …
The relationship … The link … The convergence …
The connection … interacts with … Both ….
affects … Thus it is … … causes …
influences … predicts … … leads to …
informs … presupposes … emphasises …
demonstrates … impacts on … supports …  

To present prior or background ideas
In the past, … Historically, … Traditionally, …
Customarily, … Beforehand, … Originally, …
Prior to this, … Earlier, … Formerly, …
Previously, … Over time, … At the time of …
Conventionally, … Foundational to this is … In earlier …
Initially, … At first, … Recently …
Until now, … The traditional interpretation …    

To present others’ ideas
According to … Based on the findings of … it can be argued… … proposed that …
As explained by … … states that … … claims that …
However, … stated that … … suggested … … concluded that …
Similarly, … stated that …. … for example, … … agreed that …
Based on the ideas of … … defined …. as …. … relates …
As identified by … … disputed that … … contrasts …
With regard to … argued that … … concluded that … … confirmed that …
argues …. highlights … demonstrates …
found that … identifies … wrote that … demonstrated …
also … reported …. pointed out that …
maintained that … hypothesised that … … expressed the opinion that …
also mentioned …. asserts that …. identified …
goes on to state/suggest/say … emphasises … challenges the idea ….
showed that … explored the idea …
 

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Types of Essay Topic Prompts in Analytical Writing

This Resource is for Mainstream English Year 12 Students writing Analytical Essays for Reading and Responding to Texts AOS1 Units 3 & 4 in the SAC and VCE English Exam Section A.

Identifying the key elements of the topic that includes content words specify what the essay should cover. Identifying direction words (task words such as discuss, do you agree, how) tell you how to approach the essay and indicate the type of answer you should provide.

Look for limiting words – adjectives or adverbs such as ‘limited’, ‘always’, ‘essential’ and ‘inevitably’ that will have a significant impact on your response. Take these words into account when forming your opinion. Rephrase the topic in your own words and if in doubt, use a dictionary to look up words that you are unsure of, then try to answer the question.

Is there a quotation from the text in the prompt? Identify where the quotation is from in the text and who said it. What is the quotation telling you? Address the quotation in one of your body paragraphs.

Your approach to each essay will depend on what type of prompt is being asked. Regardless of whether the prompt is character/ theme/ quote/ how/ metalanguage or film technique based, you must always consider Message of Author OR Director in every body paragraph.  Does your response and contention to the prompt consider how the Author or Director feels about these issues, views and values and how they want their audience to react?

  1. Discuss-based prompts:

These prompts typically require an in-depth answer that takes into account all aspects of the debate concerning a topic or argument.  It is important to have a clear Main Contention that explores your side of the answer to the topic and have a proper resolution or conclusion.  Don’t leave the discussion open-ended but make sure you conclude with a purpose.  

If you are going to challenge the prompt in your discussion, use body paragraph 2 to do this and back your challenge up with evidence from the texts.  You must demonstrate reasoning skills with this type of question, by using evidence to make a case for or against the topic/argument. It is important to note that while challenging the prompt is acceptable, do not go off topic and keep addressing the content in the topic.

2.            Character-based prompts:

These prompts focus on one or more characters if the character’s name is mentioned in the prompt.  In this case, you would most likely structure your body paragraphs based on particular characters or something in common with a set of characters.  Your examples need to be relevant to the specific character named in the prompt but also consider themes or relationships of that character with other characters.  As characters in texts are always interrelated to other, the actions of others are also connected to the themes and ideas the author is trying to convey.  Don’t forget minor characters.

3.            Theme-based prompts:

Usually your paragraphs will be based around particular themes.  For example, in this case, paragraphs may be based on ‘love’, ‘escape’, ‘horrors of war’ etc.  These paragraphs can have character discussions embedded within them in order to demonstrate how the characters represent each theme.  Discussion of the author’s choice of language such as symbols or imagery can be essential to the analysis of a theme.

4.            Quote prompts:

These prompts can be character or theme-based.  However, it differs from other essay topics because it includes a direct quote from the text.  Remember that the quote is part of the prompt, so ensure that you address it.  One of the best ways of doing so is to contextualise the quote into one of the body paragraphs and analyse it in your discussion.

5.            How question prompts:

These prompts are usually structured, ‘how does the character/event/theme do this?’  OR ‘how does the author explore the idea?’  How prompts position you to focus on the author’s writing intentions through the literary construction of the text.  This can be achieved by discussing structure, language, symbols, motifs, themes, characters and the literary techniques explored in the text and then explain how they affect the narrative and the topic in the prompt.  Use the techniques as evidence to support arguments that attack the main themes/ideas/values mentioned in the prompt.

In ‘how’ type questions in films, rather than focusing on literary construction, it is important to focus on the director’s film intentions using CAMELS = camera techniques / acting / mise en scene / editing / lighting and sound.

6.            To what extent prompts:

By asking the question “to what extent’ the prompt is asking you to discuss how one element is greater in validity than the other element.  You need to answer whether the claim is to “a greater extent” or “to a lesser extent”that the assumption in the question is valid or verifiable [provable].  Therefore, there is more than one angle to answer the question.  You need to think about your opinion but also weigh up each side to the answer and discuss both sides.  To say the question definitely was “to a greater extent” you then must build your case, support it with evidence to make it valid.  Then give the other side of the case, how it was “to a lesser extent” and support it with evidence to make it valid.

7.            Do you agree prompts:

When answering these questions, the most important thing is to work out your argument – what you think about the ideas put forward in the prompt?  Are they right, or wrong?  You need a clear Main Contention as to which way you are handling the idea behind the question.  Once you decide if you agree with the question then do not answer ‘I agree’ you must use wording that shows you understand how the author/director views this topic.  Suggested answer would be ‘the author endorses the value of [the idea in the prompt]’ OR ‘the author supports the idea that [concept from the text]’.

8.            Metalanguage or film-technique prompts:

This type of prompt is very similar to How-based prompts, specifically in the fact that the discussion of film element techniques is essential.  For this type of prompt specifically, however, the actual techniques used can form more of a basis for your arguments, unlike in How-based prompts.  Look at film techniques the Director has used to get his idea across about the character, theme or event and with the elements of the film explain how these features combine to help create the film’s overall meaning.  Suggested elements of CAMELS = camera techniques / acting / mise en scene / editing / lighting and sound.

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‘Animal Farm’ by George Orwell: The Basics

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This Resource is for Year 9 English students studying the novella ‘Animal Farm’ by George Orwell as an analytical text response for the English curriculum in Victoria.

Historical Context

Animal Farm by George Orwell was written between 1943-44 during World War II. It was an era of totalitarianism in which powerful European countries were under the control of dictators such as Adolf Hitler Fuhrer of Germany, Benito Mussolini Leader of Italy, and Joseph Stalin General Secretary of the Communist Party of the Soviet Union. Orwell drew strongly from Russian history of the 1917 Russian Revolution and other repressive totalitarian regimes to write his novella.

Satire and Allegory

Not published until 1945, Animal Farm is both a satire [using humour to criticise] on equality, how power corrupts and an allegory [metaphor/fable] on communism, the 1917 Russian Revolution and the brutal Stalinist period which followed. Orwell himself explained the novella as “the history of a revolution that went wrong”.

Failure of Communism or a Fairy-Tale

The novella can be seen as the historical analysis of the failure of communism or merely a fairy-tale where barnyard animals rebel to drive out humans and attempt to rule the farm themselves on the basis of equality free from their master’s tyranny. The animals seem to have achieved a utopian sort of communism where each animal would work according to his capacity, respecting the needs of others. Unfortunately, the venture failed when a power-hungry pig, Napoleon, (representing Joseph Stalin) becomes a ruthless totalitarian dictator.

Warning of Absolute Power of a Totalitarian System

While the animals cling to the idea they are their own masters of the farm, the fairy-tale does not have a happy ending. Power has turned the elite pigs from simple ‘comrades’ to tyrants who walk on two legs like humans and carry whips. Through propaganda and brainwashing the pigs change the crucial rule of their ‘Seven Commandments’ from “all animals are equal” to “all animals are equal but some animals are more equal than others”. The 7th Commandment is emblematic of Orwell’s belief that the 1917 Communist Revolution in Russia merely replaced one capitalist class system with another hierarchy of power as a warning to all mankind against the absolute power of a totalitarian system.

Animal Farm as an Allegory

Animal Farm as an allegory means that the story, situations, and characters stand for other characters and events so as to make a point about them. The main action of Animal Farm stands for the Russian Revolution of 1917 and the early years of the Soviet Union under Joseph Stalin. ‘Animalism’ is really communism and ‘Manor Farm’ is Russia. The setting of the farm is a dystopia which is an imagined world that is opposite to a utopia, an ideal place or state.

THEMES
power & control totalitarianism communism
corruption loyalty propaganda
religion language used for power revolution & rebellion
equality & inequality class system deception & betrayal
fear & exploitation apathy idealism
SYMBOLS
Manor Farm / Mr Jones & Mr Pilkington Animal Farm Old Major & the song he teaches the animals
Snowball Napoleon Squealer
Boxer 7 Commandments The barn
The windmill The pigs The dogs
Mollie & Clover The cat Muriel
Benjamin The rats Moses
milk & apples The hens & ducks Jones rifle

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