Identity and Belonging Theme

Identity and Belonging

Identity and Belonging was part of the old VCE Context curriculum and is NOT included in the 2017 English curriculum from 2017 onwards.  Please use this information on Identity and Belonging as a theme only.

The Main Issues around the Theme of Identity and Belonging are:

  • Nature or nurture – what makes us who we are?
  • Defining ourselves through others – the paradox of belonging
  • The cost of belonging – sacrificing the self
  • Challenging and developing our identity – our identity develops as we grow and change
  • Choosing not to belong –being an outsider in mainstream society can be difficult

Here are my Essay Ideas for Identity and Belonging

Nature or Nurture

Ideas for an essay

Style and Purpose  =          persuasive essay / hybrid imaginative

Form                       =          deliver a speech at the wedding of your brother

Audience                =           guests at the wedding

Language               =           personal tone, descriptive, simple sentences, some humour

Explains speech

Tell the guests about the relationship you share with your brother, what it means to you, what you have learned from your brother and the impact they have on the family.

Defining ourselves through others

Ideas for an essay

Style and Purpose       =       imaginative writing

Form                           =        personal letter of refugee in Australia

Audience                     =        relative back in home country of refugee

Language                   =         personal tone, descriptive words used by family members

Explains letter

Write to an aunty left behind in the homeland about feelings of estrangement and alienation that came from being uprooted and transplanted on foreign soil.  The perilous journey to get to Australia.  Missing the sense of tradition and extended family. Remaining connected to the land and place where they once belonged.

The cost of belonging – sacrificing the self

Ideas for an essay 

Style and Purpose     =         imaginative / reflective piece

Form                           =         reflective piece in a diary entry

Audience                    =         only the author of the diary

Language                   =         personal tone, first person, anecdotes, unspoken feelings

Explains reflective

Masking the true self in order to belong.  Using a stream of unconscious and unspoken feelings never told to the family before.  Pain at having to disguise true feelings so that the family group would not disapprove.  Not wanting to go to university to study medicine like all the other family members.  Having to be always the ‘good’ child but afraid of disappointing parents.  Wanting another career totally different from parent’s expectations.

Some Other Ideas for you to Consider Writing Essays / Expository or Imaginative:

  • Stolen generation children now adults loss of both identity and belonging in society.  Not accepted as white or black and unable to relate to either groups.
  • Being homosexual in mainstream society / multi-cultural society and coming out
  • Realising you are trans-gender as a child or adult born in the wrong body
  • Unemployed youth who are struggling to find employment and they feel that they lack a purpose and a sense of belonging
  • Being subjected to racist principles that are “skin-deep”.  Your feelings when white people cannot see beyond superficial aspects such as your colour or appearance.

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To Kill a Mockingbird

To Kill a Mockingbird

To Kill a Mockingbird by Harper Lee is a Worthy Recipient of the Pulitzer Prize in 1961

It does not matter how many times I teach To Kill a Mockingbird to Year 10 English students, I find a deeper understanding of Harper Lee’s beautiful novel each time I read it.  What’s not to love about this amazing novel?  It’s a story about a man wrongly accused of rape and a lawyer who confronts racial prejudice to defend him in a small Alabama town riddled with the poverty and racial tensions of the American South in 1935.  Yet when you look deeper it also chronicles the journey of its characters to do what is right, no matter what humiliation or consequences plagued them.

The Moral Courage in To Kill a Mockingbird

By observing her father, Scout gradually discovers that moral courage is both more complicated and more difficult to enact than the physical courage most familiar and understandable to children.  To Kill a Mockingbird reveals the heroic nature of acting with moral courage when adhering to social mores would be far less dangerous.  At a time in the South when it was outrageous and practically unthinkable for a white person to look at the world from a minority’s perspective, Harper Lee has Atticus explain to Scout: “You never really understand a person until you consider things from his point of view—until you climb into his skin and walk around in it”.  For Atticus Finch, climbing into someone’s skin and walking around in it represents true courage.  This would have to be my all time favourite quote.

 Focus on the Trial of Tom Robinson

The novel focuses on the Finch family over the course of two years, lawyer and father Atticus Finch; his ten-year-old son, Jem; and his six-year-old daughter, Scout (whose real name is Jean Louise).  Scout serves as the narrator of the book.  Her narration is based on her memories of the events leading up to, during, and after her father’s defence of a black man, Tom Robinson, accused of raping a white woman, Mayella Ewell.  Through Scout’s inexperienced eyes (she is only eight at the conclusion of the novel), the reader encounters a world where people are judged by their race, inherited ideas of right and wrong dominate, and justice does not always prevail.  However, by observing Atticus Finch’s responses to the threats and gibes of the anti-Tom Robinson faction and his sensitive treatment towards Tom Robinson and his family and friends, the reader, again through Scout’s eyes, discovers what it means to behave morally.  In fact, do the right thing in the face of tremendous social pressure.

 What I Love About To Kill a Mockingbird is the Other Side to Scout

To Kill a Mockingbird also chronicles the journey of a girl who challenges gender stereotypes in her determination to remain a tomboy.  Harper Lee clearly explores Scout’s unconventional female characteristics.  Aunt Alexandra tells Scout Finch to act like a lady and wear a dress so she can “be a ray of sunshine in [her] father’s lonely life.”  Scout does not respond positively: she retorts that she can “be a ray of sunshine in pants just as well”.

In fact, Scout does not respond positively to anything feminine, preferring reading instead of sewing, playing outside instead of inside, and the nickname “Scout” to the girlish “Jean Louise.”

On the other hand, the culture that Harper Lee depicts does not respond positively to Scout’s tomboyish inclinations.  Scout lives in Maycomb, Alabama, a rural Southern town, during the Great Depression.  In this setting, society dictates strict gender stereotypes, and people rarely cross the barrier between masculinity and femininity.  Maycomb is a place where “[l]adies bathed before noon, after their three o’clock naps, and by nightfall were like soft teacakes with frostings of sweat and sweet talcum”. Scout, however, refuses to be a “soft teacake.”

Through her actions, Scout demonstrates a flexible view of gender.  Scout is not born with an innate predisposition to be a tomboy; rather her behaviours define her as a tomboy.  As she consistently repeats unconventional behaviours, she presents her own conception of what gender means.  Harper Lee depicts gender as a standard that alters according to each individual.

Gender Bending During WWII

The twentieth century brought a shift in attitudes towards tomboys.  During the years in which Harper Lee grew up and wrote her novel, America advocated the home as a woman’s domain.  During WWII views changed as women entered the workforce assuming positions previously considered to be masculine.  Michelle Ann Abate in Tomboys: A Literary and Cultural History. Philadelphia: Temple UP, 2008 (p.146) refers to Rosie the Riveter as an icon of “tomboyish toughness”.  However, society’s high regard for gender-bending females was temporary, when the war ended, women once again returned to their homes (Abate p.150).

To Kill a Mockingbird also Reflects this Ambivalence Concerning Gender-bending Females

The novel contains characters who both support and disapprove of Scout’s tomboyism.  For instance, Aunt Alexandra wants Scout to wear a dress, while Atticus allows her to wear overalls.  Moreover, other characters paradoxically condemn feminine mannerisms while simultaneously expecting them.  Scout’s brother Jem, for instance, frequently teases her for being a girl, but he also commands, “It’s time you started bein’ a girl and acting right!”.

Scout Stays Resolute

Even though she endures these conflicting principles, Scout stays resolute.  For example, when Jem criticizes her “girlish” fear of the Radley house, she shows masculine bravery and joins him in sneaking into the Radley yard.  On the other hand, when he suggests she “take up sewin’ or something,” Scout replies, “Hell no”.  Reflecting the twentieth-century’s hesitation over the changing roles of women, Jem has shifting expectations for Scout as a female.  Scout, however, remains steadfastly opposed to conventional femininity.

What’s not to love about this amazing book?  I can’t think of anything.

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A Brief Analysis of This Boy’s Life by Tobias Wolff

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Tobias Wolff is the Narrator and Protagonist of This Boy’s Life

In This Boy’s Life Tobias Wolff the author, is an adult reflecting back on his rough upbringing.  His narrator and protagonist Toby Wolff recounts his life with three abusive fathers and an impulsive mother.  At a young age Toby decides to call himself Jack which represents a type of alter ego he builds for himself as he invents ways to escape from the grim reality of the life the adults around him have constructed.  His life is filled with domestic violence, alcohol abuse, criminal activity, bullying and emotional neglect.

The Significance of one of the Quotes at the Beginning of the Book

Before we read the memoir This Boy’s Life, the author Tobias Wolff presents us with a quote from Oscar Wilde: “The first duty in life is to assume a pose.  What the second is, no one has yet discovered”.  It is clear from the beginning of the book the author has made the issue of identity and the struggle to attain a certain type of identity a major component in this memoir.

This Boy’s Life is a Story of Two Boys

As we read further into the book, the protagonist Toby Wolff struggles to find an identity by assuming various characteristics he thinks those around him will admire.  In fact This Boy’s Life is really the story about two boys, Toby and Jack.  Toby is an ‘A’ grade student, a boy deeply concerned about the world’s esteem, a loyal support to his mother, destined for Princeton like his brother Geoffrey.  Jack, on the other hand, is a liar, a thief and violent.  Both boys are versions of the same boy, a dreamer constantly searching for his identity, but never belonging to the world he craves.  His alter ego is “the splendid phantom who carries all [his] hopes” of fleeing the harsh environment of his horrific childhood.

Breaking Down an Essay Prompt on This Boy’s Life

Let’s look at breaking down an Essay Prompt on This Boy’s Life using the TEEL structure for Expository Essays.  We begin with a Draft Introduction that contains the Main Contention and Topic Sentences that will form our Body Paragraphs and finish with a Draft Conclusion.  Remember that the body paragraphs are not complete in this draft essay but are simply a starting point to build on for the rest of the essay.

Here’s the Prompt:

“We were ourselves again – restless, scheming, poised for flight” (p.221)  Explain what Toby means by the statement.

Draft Introduction

On the surface, This Boy’s Life seems bleak and pessimistic and the hardships faced by Jack and Rosemary certainly test their resilience.  Yet Jack and Rosemary are dreamers in constant search of changing their circumstances.  Rosemary confidently strives to better her situation and seeks change from a characteristic need to be unconventional.  Jack, however, is forced into an imaginary life to cope with a reality that is too grim to bear.  The quote appears late in “The Amen Corner” when Rosemary has landed a job in Seattle and a woman she knew has offered to put her up instead of renting.  This means Rosemary can leave her abusive marriage to Dwight and look forward to a future based on her capabilities.  For Jack he had just applied and won a scholarship to the elite Hill College, all based on a total fabrication of his talent and suitability to that life.  Together they are ready for a new life using their survival strategies to demonstrate a hope of eventual triumph over adversity.

Draft Body Paragraph 1

Topic Sentence = Jack and Rosemary are dreamers looking for a brighter future which bonds the two of them together.

Evidence = “I was caught up in my mother’s freedom, her delight in freedom, her dream of transformation”.

Explanation = Jack relates the powerful influence of his mother on his character.  Unfortunately, Rosemary’s unconventional search for freedom and fulfilment has had serious consequences for Jack.  Rosemary has moved through three abusive marriages and is not able to support Jack properly.  All her abusive husbands put Jack into vulnerable situations and none of them are responsible enough to stop Jack’s bad behaviour.

Draft Body Paragraph 2

Topic Sentence = Jack believes in his invented world to cope with a reality that is too grim to bear.

Evidence = “I believed that in some sense not factually verifiable I was a straight-A student”. In the same way Jack believed that he was “… an Eagle Scout, and powerful swimmer, and a boy of integrity”.

Explanation = Jack’s imagination helps him construct successful versions of himself which often verge on fantasy.  His application to the elite school Hill is an example of his belief in his fabrication of his true self.  The truth according to Jack was “… known only to me, but I believed it more than I believed the facts arrayed against it”.  Jack’s alter ego carries his hopes of fleeing his horrific childhood and of belonging to a world of stability, capability and convention.

Draft Body Paragraph 3

Topic Sentence = Both Rosemary and Jack are excited and alive at the prospect of change but the truth is both fraught with one disaster after another disaster with them always on the verge of “flight” from the bad situations they find themselves in.

Evidence = After three marriages Rosemary learns that staying away from Jack’s father was sensible not living with him “I’d be a fool if I did”.  Jack sees the Army provides his craved-for stability and regularity.  “It was good to find myself back in the clear life of uniforms and ranks and weapons”.

Explanation = Both Rosemary and Jack learn from their bitter experiences that the optimism and freshness of being “still half-created, being green in life” exacts a high price in terms of comfort, security and integrity.

Draft Conclusion

Although the prospect of change is a necessary aspect of the lives of Rosemary and Jack, its origins are steeped in negativity rather than any true creativity.  For both the need to act on bad circumstances becomes so familiar it fashions the ideas of their own identities.  Yet they continue as dreamers in a constant search of personal freedom and fulfilment.   Together they refuse to be defined by their circumstances despite all the evidence to the contrary.

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Analytical & Creative Responses for The Quiet American by Graham Greene

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Analytical & Creative Responses for The Quiet American by Graham Greene

You need to show how wide-ranging your thinking and hence your writing can be.  In terms of your specific response for The Quiet American, have a look at some of these ideas for essays:

Expository Essay

  • Put a creative twist on it, remember expository means ‘exploring complex ideas’ this doesn’t mean it has to be an essay
  • What about an article about the war written by Fowler?
  • A telegram?
  • Using an outside quote or scenario to set the scene or introduce an idea to your audience in an interesting way
  • A speech by one of the characters?
  • A beyond the grave reflection from Pyle about his life choices?
  • If you do an expository essay you need to show real depth of thought and strong outside links in order to stand out and show new insights
  • Think about what purpose / moral / lesson you are trying to get across to your audience in the essay

Creative / Imaginative Essay

  • Ground it in the text, write from a minor character’s point of view
  • Re-write a key scene from an alternate perspective to shed new light on the conflict at hand
  • Write one of Fowler’s news articles or telegrams
  • Write about something we hear about in the text but they don’t really explore it close up
  • Start with a purpose, who are you targeting in this narrative?
  • Why? What moral / lesson is there that they need to learn?
  • Use significant, powerful, vivid quotes from the text as a framework for your creative piece
  • Draw on Greene’s writing style, especially if what you are writing needs to be true to the text
  • Embed ideas about the prompt in a subtle manner
  • Draw on themes, key ideas, symbols, imagery to connect your  creative piece to The Quiet American

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View from Castle Rock by Alice Munro

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With particular reference to students studying The View from Castle Rock by Alice Munro

What is the Imaginative Landscape?

One of the simplest ways to define an Imaginative Landscape is as our perception of the world around us.  Such a perception might be figurative, intellectual, emotional or concrete.  Each of us has our own ideas about the physical, social, conceptual and psychological worlds we inhabit, and we communicate these ideas, in a variety of ways.  They might be conveyed as discussions or in art, or they might be implied through beliefs, values and moral or ethical views.

First of all, break down the terms of the Imaginative Landscape:

What does the literal word ‘landscape’ allude to?

  • views, features, shapes, distinguishing features and characteristics of land
  • scenery, terrain, geography, nature
  • representations, directions and points of view
  • processes and events which might shape physical landscapes (such as erosion)

What does the word ‘imaginative’ connote, broadening possible landscapes to include those which are less literal?

  • creativity, illusions/alternative realities
  • other aspects of the world
  • emotions, memories, subjectivity
  • metaphor, symbolism, artistic representation
  • communication

 Writing The Imaginative Landscape, Context in the Exam, Section B

This is a writing exercise not a text response, but students must use the text in some way.  There is no rule about how much; this will depend on your writing style. You do NOT have to refer to the text in every paragraph — a key word or idea from the text need come up only once in the entire piece or the text may be a thread running right through the writing (for example the retelling of a story from The View from Castle Rock from the viewpoint of a another character).

The Exam says you may write in any style, imaginative, persuasive, expository (or a blend of these).  In reality this means any style.  No one style gives an advantage over the other and you should aim to write to your own strengths.

The bottom line is that the Assessors are looking for good writing:

  1. that incorporates the ideas of Imaginative Landscape
  2. has some relationship to the text The View from Castle Rock
  3. has a reference to all or part of the prompt

A prompt is not a question, it is a springboard for your own writing, so unlike a text question you do not have to deal with every part of the prompt, but you must incorporate some of the perspective on the Imaginative Landscape raised by the particular prompt.

For students studying The View from Castle Rock where is the Imaginative Landscape? 

Munro herself noted that ‘landscape is so important’.  In Castle Rock, landscapes are both literal [factual] and figurative [or metaphorical/symbolic].  The book’s framework is Munro’s imagining of one possible landscape, which she maps through time and space that is of her family history.  It is not just the physical setting of the landscape but also the subjective experience and representation of the settings.  This is important within the Context of The Imaginative Landscape because it is not just landscapes that deserve consideration, but an individual’s experience of landscapes, and the ways in which an individual represents and imaginatively conceives landscapes.

Therefore, literal landscapes are explicit [clear/open] in Castle Rock, while figurative landscapes are more implicit [hidden/unspoken].  This is shown when the characters and most notably the central narrator (who remains unnamed, but is closely aligned with Munro herself) encounters with various landscapes and the communication of those encounters through both speech and writing are significant.

A.    Physical and Geographical Landscapes in Castle Rock

Since Castle Rock is about tracing family connections, recording memories, and committing history and experience to narrative record, the focus on geography in the early parts of the novel suggests that such physical landscapes are vitally important to our own understanding, not only of place, but also of culture, history and family.

  1. ‘No Advantages’, the first story firmly establishes the importance of physical/geographical landscapes, the historical context, meanings of the word ‘Hope’ and personal observations.
  2. The geographical locations are more than simply backdrops or settings for the stories they establish the tone, the intentions and themes of the entire narrative.
  3. The narrator introduces herself into the story, placing herself as a traveller in the geography of Ettrick.

 B.    Domestic Landscapes in Castle Rock

Houses are domestic landscapes with central importance in Castle Rock.  Munro sets various stories and key incidents within these domestic landscapes so the houses become as important as the characters and explore insights into the characters and relationships.  The domestic landscapes are often in harmony with their surroundings (the physical and environmental settings) and sometimes in contrast with what surrounds them.

C.     Historical and Ancestral Landscapes

Castle Rock documents the geographical history of the Laidlaw family, but it is also an historical exploration of the narrator’s family history.  She begins her story in the present, visiting the Ettrick Valley, then takes us back to the early 1700’s to introduce Will O’Phaup.  His story is told in the present tense using a third-person subjective point of view so that we are closely aligned with the character.  He is a vibrant character that Munro wants us to know and care about and he sets the scene for the other characters that will help us gain a sense of the narrator’s historical landscape.

D.    Imagined Landscapes

While Castle Rock is grounded in physical landscapes inhabited by its characters, it also alludes to other landscapes that characters may never see but are able to imagine.  These imagined landscapes contextualise the ‘real settings’, demonstrating the character’s awareness that their own surroundings are small elements of the global landscape.

Consider these imagined landscapes:

  1. America is both a real landscape and for James Laidlaw who dreams of going there, an imagined, wondrous land of opportunity (p.30)
  2. Mary Laidlaw shows curiosity about a fellow passenger’s accent, she wonders what part of the country or the world he could have come from, realising she has led a sheltered life in a small rural community (p.37)
  3. The narrator has a suitcase that smells of imagined landscapes of trains, coal fires and cities of travel (p.252)
  4. The narrator’s father has a fondness for and familiarity with, the world as represented in his Historical Atlas (p.299)
  5. The book’s final image is the narrator’s imagined landscape of the tremendous pounding of the sea (p.349) recalling the sea that the Laidlaws traversed at the beginning of the text
  6. The young narrator’s imagined world of exciting things (sexual things) which have not actually happened for her yet (p.251)

E.     Written Landscapes

A central theme in the text is the idea of re-creating history and physical landscapes through written communications.  ‘No Advantages’ introduces this theme, with Munro offering us a written description of Ettrick, but she also relies on historical documentation which describes the landscape.  She also uses other sources of written landscapes, her father’s memoirs, Walter Laidlaw’s journal entries, Big Rob’s descriptions of Morris Township or oral descriptions of the characters.

F.     Remembered Landscapes

There are times when characters recall landscapes of home of their past, and these can be private recollections not turned into stories or maps.  Memory functions as a kind of informed, backward looking imagination.  Examples of remembered landscapes in the text include:

  • Edinburgh Castle which appears very different to Andrew Laidlaw on his return visit from his recollection of it (p.31)
  • The country store in Grey county where the narrator once had an ice cream (p.140)
  • The farmhouse where the narrator lived (p.288-289)
  • The farmland near the house where the narrator grew up, in which many structures such as barns, and fences have been removed, making the countryside (paradoxically) appear smaller (p.343-344)
  • Jamie Laidlaw’s home which the family had to leave, memories of which prompted his plan to hide his baby sister and blame Becky Johnson so that the whole family would return home (p.95-107)

Locating Ideas in the Imaginative Landscape

These are key points in the structure of any narrative text.  When finding ideas in the text, ask yourself these questions:

  1. Crisis points– major dilemmas characters have to deal with.
    1. Does this crisis alter a character’s perception of the landscape?
    2. Does a crisis or turning point coincide with a change in the landscape?
    3. A personal crisis can bring about a change in an individual’s relationship with the landscape
  2. Turning points– points in the text where a character has to make a decision or when something occurs to cause a change of direction in the character’s life.  The characters then look closely on events and reflect on them, as these give a real sense of the long term impact of crucial events.
    1. Do any reflections consider relationships with the landscape?
    2. Are any landscapes transformed in the character’s mind?
    3. Reflection on the significance of a landscape brings about a reassessment of its value.
  3. Forging and breaking relationships– revealing experiences revolve around the forcing and breaking of relationships.  Consider more than relationships between individuals, but also between groups and even nations that have far reaching consequences.
    1. Does a new or broken relationship cause reconsideration of the value of the landscape?
    2. Do any new relationships introduce new ideas about the value of the landscape?
    3. Our perception of the landscape is often changed when our relationships begin or end.
  4. Journeys and Quests– journeys often represent growth.  A physical journey usually parallels an inner journey from adolescence to maturity, from innocence to experience, from lack of self awareness to self awareness.  Quests involve a search for something valuable and usually require many obstacles to be overcome.  Journeys and quests can reveal and test the emotional and spiritual development of a character.
    1. Journeys to and through new landscapes are often used to represent an awareness of a new inner landscape
    2. Does this occur in View from Castle Rock?  If so, are the changes beneficial?
    3. A journey to a new landscape can bring a sense of renewal.
  5. Settings and Contexts– settings can range from historical period in which the text is set to physical locations and social contexts, urban or rural landscapes, wealthy or poor social contexts.
    1. Is a landscape shown to have a significant impact on an individual’s responses to life?
    2. Is a connection to the landscape shown to be a major factor in a person or group’s belief system or sense of emotional well-being?
    3. Landscape is neutral, it only gains significance because of the ways in which people imagine it.

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Poetry Analysis Step by Step

Why Read Poems?

Some people say they don’t like poetry, it’s boring or they don’t understand it.  I think poetry is more like a song, the more you hear it the more you like it.  The words are very similar to poetry; in fact we can break down the verses of songs and see the meaning as poetry.

Poetry doesn’t have to be boring; it can also be funny like limericks.

Start with a Step by Step Analysis

Have a look at this Poetry Analysis Step by Step Flow Chart in PowerPoint to show you the way to read and understand a poem.  Follow it below as well with a full explanation of the Poetry Analysis Step by Step.

Poetry Analysis flow chart

1. Read a poem 2 or 3 times

Each time you read a poem you notice different things

When you read the poem a second time you pick up on ideas and themes that you may have missed the first time you read it.  Also the poet can have ideas hidden just below the surface of the words and as you read it again, the new ideas can jump out.

2. Paraphrase the poem by stanza next to the original text

Writing it in your own words is a good idea to make sense of the poem, so you know what it means in simple terms

Stanza means the verses of the poem just like a song

How the poet organises the stanzas in a poem is often an important aspect of the poem’s structure.  Nothing in a poem is by accident.  Poets choose their words carefully as well as giving careful thought to the form and layout of the poem.  You should ask yourself why the poet has done this or that because there will be a reason and there is an effect for everything in a poem.

3. Answer the 5 W’s

Who? Who is the poet referring to?

What? What is the poem about?

Why? Why is the poet writing about it?

When? When is the poem set, the time period?

Where? Where is the poem, the place the poet is taking about, the setting?

4. Identify the theme, message or topic

What is the poet trying to say? What is the poet’s message in the poem?

What is the point? Is the poet trying to make a specific point in the poem?

5. Identify and Highlight Examples of Literary Techniques

Simile

Definition: Simile is when you compare two nouns (persons, places or things) that are unlike, with “like” or “as.” “The water is like the sun.”  “The water is like the sun” is an example of simile because water and the sun have little in common, and yet they’re being compared to one another. The “is” is also part of what makes this stanza an example of simile. “The rain falls like the sun,rising upon the mountains.”

Metaphor

When something is described in terms of something else, ‘her eyes are the stars in the sky’ is a metaphor as one thing her eyes is being described in terms of another thing the stars. Metaphors are comparisons that show how two things that are not alike in most ways are similar in one important way. Metaphors are a way to describe something. Authors use them to make their writing more interesting or entertaining. Unlike similes that use the words “as” or “like” to make a comparison, metaphors state that something is something else.

Imagery

Poets use words to create images in your mind.

Alliteration

This is the repetition of a consonant sound in the words.  For example slippery slithering snake is alliteration.

Personification

This is where human qualities or emotions are given to non human things.  The wind howled in agony all day.  He gazed at the angry sea.

Tone

The overall mood of the poem, the emotions can be sad, optimistic, solemn.

Point of View

From what point of view is the poet writing.

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Metalanguage for Drama and Plays

Plays have Some Special Features

Although many features of drama are similar to those of other narrative fiction genres, plays have some special features, most of which are directly related to the fact that a play is intended to be heard and seen as a live performance.  As drama is spoken, there is no narrative voice to describe places and characters or to explain characters’ thoughts and motives.  With the aid of stage directions, the dialogue has to create the characters and the context for the narrative, generate the narrative momentum and generally fill the audience in with background information.

Elements of Drama

Many students will be familiar with drama associated with news and programs on television that have heightened emotions, extremely intense situations, unpredictable and even horrific outcomes.  Most of these elements of drama are found in great tragedies in movies and stage drama like the works of William Shakespeare.  Elements found in tragedies include conflict, suspense, distress, pain and suffering.  Comedies, on the other hand set up conflicts of a different order, they are often based on misunderstandings between characters and fraught relationships.

Metalanguage [the language to describe language devices]

When you look at metalanguage for drama and plays there are some specific terms that are distinctly different from narrative texts.  However, many terms can be interchangeable with drama to create the appropriate meaning in the context of the drama or play being performed.

Below is a list of Metalanguage for Drama & Plays

The list incorporates other terms from narratives that you can consider when describing significant moments in a play that you are studying.

Metalanguage for Drama & Plays

Word

Definition

Act The major sections into which plays are divided.  Each act includes several scenes.
Allegory Story in which there are 2 meanings, a literal meaning and a symbolic representation of the story.
Alliteration Repeating the initial consonant sounds of words close together to achieve an effect.
Allusion A reference to a famous figure or an event from literature, history or mythology.
Analogy A comparison to things that are very alike.
Antagonist A character opposite to the protagonist (main character).
Aside A short speech that a character gives directly to the audience.  Other characters remain on stage but it is understood by the audience that they cannot hear the aside.
Caricature Exaggerated description of a person.
Context Environment and situations surrounding the text.
Chorus A group of actors in Greek tragedy who are not characters in the play.  They speak between acts and comment on the morality of the characters’ actions and decisions.
Dialogue Anything said by one character to another character.  A play is written in dialogue.
Drama A work intended for performance on stage by actors.  Most drama is divided into the genres of tragedy or comedy.
Denouement The unraveling of a plot.
Dramatic irony Irony understood by the audience but not the characters in the play.
Epilogue Closing part of a speech or play.
Epitaph Statement carved on a tombstone that sums up a person’s life.
Eulogy Speech at a funeral.
Euphemism Indirect way of saying something that is unpleasant.
Fable A short story that has a lesson in life.
Flashback Device used by writers and film makers to return to events in the past.
Imagery Pictures created with words.
Irony Literal meaning is different from intended meaning.
Melodrama Play based on exaggerated or sensational part of a story.
Metaphor Figure of speech comparing one object with another.
Mise en scene Stage or film setting with all the elements that form the scene.
Monologue A part of a drama in which a single actor speaks alone.
Paradox A statement that appears to contradict itself but has some element of truth to it for example beautiful tyrant.
Personification A type of metaphor in which objects or animals are given human characteristics.
Plot Sequence of events in a text and play that tells the story.
Playwright The writer of the play.
Prologue Introduction to a play.
Protagonist The main character.
Repetition Repeating words over again for effect.
Scene Smaller sections into which the play is divided within each act.
Set Backdrops, furniture and props on the stage used to set the scene.
Setting Time and place in which the action occurs.
Soliloquy A speech made by a character when alone on stage.  Soliloquies let the audience know what the character is thinking and feeling.
Stage directions Made by the Director to help create meaning and establish settings and sound effects for the audience to follow.
Symbol Something used to represent something else.
Theme Central idea or issue behind the text or drama.
Tragedy Drama that tells of serious events that end with disastrous consequences.
Tragic hero Main character who suffers a down fall due to defeat or weakness in their character.

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Developing a Text Response for In the Country of Men by Hisham Matar

Front Cover

Topic Prompt for In the Country of Men by Hisham Matar

‘Although men dominate Suleiman’s world, it is his mother who holds it together’.  Discuss.

Break down the topic prompt = what are the key terms in the topic?

  1. Men dominate Suleiman’s world = who are the men and how do they dominate?
  2. But his mother holds it together = how does Najwa ensure Suleiman is safe?
  3. What does discuss mean? = put the case for and against a main contention and end with some statement of your own position
  4. Do you agree with the topic prompt? = if yes, then state your main contention as to why you agree Suleiman’s mother is the one who holds it together
  5. The Introduction = clearly state your main contention so that it answers the topic question
    1. Start the introduction with a Hook that shows you understand the bigger picture of the context
    2. Link The Hook back to the main contention

Introduction

 [The Hook] From 1969-2011 Muammar el-Qaddafi was internationally condemned as a dictator and autocrat whose authoritarian administration violated the human rights of Libyan citizens.   During his turbulent reign men held all the positions of power, made all the important decisions, were able to carry weapons and wield power over life and death.  As the title suggests, Suleiman lived in ‘a country of men’, a place where women had few rights or opportunities. [End of The Hook]  Suleiman’s mother, Najwa recognised her subservient place: “I must be a good wife, loyal and unquestioning, support my man regardless”.  Yet it is a place she accepts with reluctance and resents her lack of freedom and independence within her society.  However, despite her flaws, when she needs to, Najwa uses all the resources at her disposal to keep her family intact and her son safe from harm.  She is the central figure in Suleiman’s life and as dominant a presence in his life as his father is.  She expresses her emotions and thoughts clearly and forcefully.  It is through her that Suleiman learns not only about love, but about the realities of the society he lives in.

 Body of Essay

Link all paragraphs through a logical progression of ideas that develop the argument.

Introduction =  States the main contention.  Despite the limited means available to her, Suleiman’s mother ensures the family stays together and that Suleiman remains safe.

Body Paragraph 1 =    Discusses ways in which men hold power, politically, socially, domestically.  Examples include Najwa’s father as well as her husband, the roles of men in the neighbouring families.  This paragraph responds to the first part of the topic how men are dominant.

Body Paragraph 2 =    Considers some limitations of male power and ways in which it leads to conflict and dislocation.  This paragraph moves on to limits of male power which explains the other side of the topic.

Body Paragraph 3 =    Leads into a discussion of how Suleiman’s mother provides necessary qualities and values in this male-dominated world.  This paragraph takes up the second part of the topic which is the importance of Suleiman’s mother.

Body Paragraph 4 =    Expands on examples of ways in which Suleiman’s mother keeps the family together and protects Suleiman.  Covers Suleiman’s emotional needs as well as physical safety.  This paragraph uses textual examples to show how Najwa holds his world together.

Body Paragraph 5 =    Considers Najwa’s character in a broader context.  This includes the constraints of patriarchal culture, her sometimes unconventional behaviour, her complexity and how this impacts on the mother-son relationship.  This paragraph moves on to consider Najwa in relation to male power which in turn combines both parts of the topic.

Conclusion =   Sums up the discussion ie. men dominate in the family and the wider society, but Suleiman’s mother keeps the family together and places Suleiman’s well-being above all else.  She is not without faults but develops a strong and lasting bond with her son.

 The Conclusion

The men in Suleiman’s world have power and authority, but they move through his life without becoming close to him, or providing the knowledge he needs to make sense of his world.  It is his mother who, despite her flaws and vulnerabilities, provides continuity and intimacy, who places her son’s needs above political views or social expectations.  Above all, as Suleiman puts it, there is ‘always love’, and this love between mother and son provides the necessary stable centre throughout Suleiman’s experiences of change, loss, betrayal and exile.

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Writing a Hook in the Introduction of an Expository Essay

What is an Expository Essay?

Expository writing is writing that focus on ‘exposing’ an idea, giving a balanced discussion of different views, considers pros and cons of each with logical and informative evidence.   Expository Essays are written to inform the reader about a particular topic.

The Types of Expository Writing can take the form of:

  • Essays = an educated audience in mind, with moderate language, usually in the 3rd person
  • Personal reflections/letters = an audience of one reader well known to the writer, with personal tone and descriptive language
  • News articles = the audience of a newspaper or magazine readers, detached tone for an objective account, written in the 3rd person
  • Biography/autobiography = with readers of special interest in mind in the subject, usually formal language
  • Research piece = readers with a special interest or knowledge, formal language, serious and specialised vocabulary
  • Diary entry/blog = the writer of a diary, readers with a special interest in the writer, personal tone, descriptive, uses the first person “I”

The Introduction

The first paragraph of an Expository Essay should introduce the reader to the essay topic and explain the purpose of the writing.  It should create interest in the essay, outline the writer’s main ideas, and suggest how these ideas will be presented within the body of the essay.

Writing a Hook in the Introduction of an Expository Essay

The first sentence (or sentences) of an essay should catch the reader’s attention (literally “hook” them into your essay).  It must introduce the topic of the essay in an interesting way and show that you understand the wider context of the topic.

Consider using one of the following strategies to “hook” the reader:

  1. Ask questions that are relevant to the prompt that you will address (3 maximum)
  2. Use a famous quote (by an expert on the topic) that begins the essay in a knowledgeable and authoritative way and reflect upon it
  3. Tell an anecdote (a story about a character, an individual or yourself) that is relevant
  4. Describe a scene (like a photo or a film setting)
  5. Create a hypothetical situation (imagine if …)
  6. An eye-catching statement using an interesting idea or an idea opposing the main contention to introduce the topic
  7. A surprising statistic using a detail that is not widely known to introduce the topic

Then still in the Introduction, continue on to state the contention or main focus of your essay.

Keys to Effective Expository Writing

  • write clearly
  • use a clear and logical structure
  • explain thoroughly the different ideas or arguments
  • emphasise reason rather than emotion
  • give considered thought to different perspectives and viewpoints

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Narrative Non-Fiction Texts Summary

Year 11, Area of Study 1, Reading and Responding, Using Narrative Non-Fiction Texts

Types of Narrative Non-Fiction Texts

Biography, autobiography and memoirs are popular forms of book length non-fiction narratives.  Like novels they tell a story, the story of someone’s personal experience.  They give insight into the lives of others whose experiences are quite different from our own.  They can increase our understanding of many issues, human suffering and dilemmas.  They can present the untold story of someone who lives through a situation such as a war, recount an unknown event or simply bring us stories of courage, resilience and heroism.  The account is based on actual events and is always told through a particular point of view.

Biographies

A biography records the most significant events of a person’s life, usually in chronological order.  A biographer researches the subject (often a noted scientist, musician or artist) in order to present the information fairly and honestly.  A biography generally aims to have a neutral, detached tone and is written in a formal style while giving readers new insight into the subject.

Autobiography

An autobiography is written in the first person and recounts significant events of the writer’s life and times.  There is no necessity here for the writer to be neutral.  An autobiography can be full of personal views or strong opinions and can be written in an informal style.

Memoir

Like a diary entry, a memoir is a record of memories, but more comprehensive and formal in style.  It is produced for a public rather than a private audience.  A memoir usually covers only a certain period or event in a writer’s life.

Examples of Narrative Non-Fiction Texts Studied in Year 11

Night by Elie Wiesel is an autobiographical account of Elie’s incarceration in a series of German concentration camps in World War II

The Rugmaker of Mazar-e-Sharif by Najaf Mazari (co-authored by Robert Hillman) is an autobiographical account of Najaf’s life in Afghanistan and his successful application for asylum in Australia

Area of Study 1, Reading and Responding

Studying a narrative non-fiction text in Area of Study 1, Reading and Responding, you must focus on reading and understanding the texts and then responding to them analytically.  The chosen texts for Year 11 explore a range of experiences and offer insights into human experience and the human condition.  Texts like Night by Elie Wiesel help you to reflect on how individuals respond to challenge and adversity, what they value, what gives them hope and why they behave the way they do.

When studying a Narrative Non-Fiction Text 

You will need to know the text really well. You should have read the text several times gaining an overview of the story line and characters. When you re-read the text, take time to make notes by highlighting the following:

  1. plot summary
  2. significant scenes
  3. useful quotations
  4. important dialogue
  5. major turning points
  6. narratives climaxes
  7. character profiles
  8. major themes
When making notes, remember to put the relevant page numbers referring to the text which will save you time looking them up again to use in essays.  Before writing an essay on the text make sure you know the answers to the following questions by using a summary sheet on the text.

Use this Summary Sheet for Narrative Non-Fiction Texts :

  1. Title and author of the text
  2. What is the text about in general terms?
  3. What is the form or genre of the text = novel, short story collection, biography, autobiography or memoir?
  4. When and where is the text set?
  5. Why is the setting important?
  6. List 3-5 key events
  7. Comment on the structure and arrangement of events
  8. How are the characters presented?
  9. Think about what the characters are like and how is this conveyed to the reader
  10. What ideas or issues and themes are explored in the text?
  11. What features are used?
  12. Note images, symbols and language
  13. What do you think the author’s purpose might be?
  14. What values are endorsed or criticised in the text?

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