Essay Introductions and Message of Author in Burial Rites by Hannah Kent

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This Post follows on from my earlier Post explaining Message of Author and its importance in analytical essays for Year 12 Maintstream English.

Look at these 4 prompts and my Essay Introductions where Message of Author is colour coded.

Essay Introductions / Message of Author in Burial Rites

Prompt #1                 “I understand that these people did not see me.  I was two dead men.  I was a burning farm.  I was a knife.  I was blood”.  Discuss how the reader’s perspective of Agnes is formed in the novel.

Burial Rites by Hannah Kent explores the reader’s perspective in her novel by a complex structure of official documents and the many narrative voices that have their own viewpoints of Agnes in discovering her secrets and the extent of her guilt.  The significance of the quote is that Agnes realises that these people standing around did not see her as a person.  They see the implication of the murders of Natan Ketilsson and Petur Jonsson as “two dead men”, the image of the “burning farm”, the murder weapon “a knife” and the consequences of the murders the “blood”.  Kent enables the reader’s perspective to be formed by some characters who have biased viewpoints about Agnes.  As readers we see how unreliable as narrators they are with their own personal agendas and prejudices against her.  As Agnes tells her own story other characters change their perspectives of her as the novel progresses.  Kent’s stated intention to present a “more ambiguous portrayal” of Agnes is evident from the start of the novel and this ambiguity is fuelled by the very fabric of the novel that is composed of many narrative voices.

For Reference Only = Ambiguity [uncertainty] explanation = Hannah Kent attempts to challenge the audience’s perception of Agnes based on her murder of Natan through promoting a deeper understanding of her former life.  Kent adopts the idea that people are not ‘monsters’ but have a mixture of unconscious motives.  Kent characterises Agnes so that by the change of perspectives and the change in judgements she is able to create a more ambiguous and arguably more realistic, ‘human’ character.  Kent’s ability to create such uncertainty about Agnes also relies on the dilemma regarding the morality of her act of murder.

Prompt #2                 “Discuss the ways in which Kent manipulates the reader’s compassion for her characters”.

19th century Iceland society harshly judges those on the margins.  In her novel Burial Rites Hannah Kent cautions readers about stereotyping those individuals confined to a marginalised position in society through no fault of their own.  Kent criticises the harsh religious and social policies of the patriarchal institutions that stereotype Agnes as a murderer.  In order to manipulate the readers’ compassion for her characters the author compares the binary of evil characters against the good to develop our empathy for those who support Agnes.  Then she takes Agnes, Toti and Margret on a spiritual and emotional journey transforming them at the start of the novel from a judgemental mindset to value compassion at the end of the novel.  By encouraging readers to recognise the ambivalence of Agnes’ crime she suggests there are often extenuating circumstances that need to be considered before judging her guilty.  As Agnes divulges her personal stories of her life to Toti, Margret and the family at Kornsa she searches for forgiveness and compassion in her listeners.  Kent is able to manipulate the readers to view those characters with kindness as the listeners develop and change responding to Agnes’ emotional demands so that the ultimate journey towards compassion is shown in the cathartic and confessional aspect of Agnes’ story telling mission that gives her a renewed passion for life. 

Prompt #3                “This valley is small and she had a reputation for a sharp tongue and loose skirts”.  Burial Rites explores how a society measures an individual’s worth.  Discuss.

19th century Iceland was a conservative society deeply divided by class with power residing in the hands of a relatively few men dominated by an uncompromising religious ethos and traditional gender expectations.  It is clear in the novel Burial Rites by Hannah Kent that the measures Icelandic society used to value an individual’s worth are based on prejudice, ignorance and bias, cruelly stereotyping people according to gender and social status.  Kent explores how society as a whole did not look favourably upon women of low social standing who were ‘too clever’ or who deviated from their conventional roles as an obedient wife or daughter.  According to Kent, the protagonist Agnes Magnusdottir struggled against the limitations and expectations forced on her by society, some of which are due to her gender and others that are the consequence of her position as a landless servant.  In a conservative context Agnes is viewed as ‘different’ by many who know her and she is resented for the perceived airs she gives herself.  The text examines how many characters view Agnes’ qualities and her worth in both negative and positive ways that set her apart from her peers.  The fact that Agnes is ‘different’ makes it easier for people to believe the worst and contributes to the stereotypical perception that she must also be a ‘murderess’.  Ultimately Kent allows Agnes to go on a figurative journey that involves reclaiming her worth as an individual at least in the eyes of Toti and the family at Kornsa with whom she establishes a connection.

Prompt  #4                “Burial Rites demonstrates that fear is more powerful than love”.  Do you agree?

In Hannah Kent’s haunting novel Burial Rites, two of the most potent forces are fear and love.  Fear is rampant in 19th Century Iceland, the fear that accompanies abject [hopeless] poverty and uncertain mortality [death], as well as the fear that arises from living in a patriarchal society fortified by brutality and injustice.  For most Icelanders in the text, fear is a persistent element in their lives of “mud and struggle”.  Fear is also a political tool of repression used by the Danish authorities and Blondal’s determination to make an example of Agnes.  Agnes execution is an opportunity to send a strong message to the Icelandic community of the consequences for such a ‘grave misdemeanour’.  However, individuals are also motivated by love and in Agnes Magnusdottir’s case, to her great cost.  For many of the characters, charity and love are the primary drivers for their actions, illustrating that love has the capacity to prevail over prejudice and cruelty.  While fear and love are both shown by Kent to be powerful influences in the novel, indeed, at a personal level, they are often intertwined with love presented as the greater force, as it can overcome fear.

Message of Author in Burial Rites by Hannah Kent

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For Year 12 Mainstream English students studying the text Burial Rites by Hannah Kent in AOS1 Unit 3 Reading and Creating Texts Analytical Interpretation, it is very important that your essay contains the Message of Author in your Introduction, each of your Body Paragraphs and in the Conclusion.

How do you elevate your essay to become more sophisticated, analysing with insight and thus achieve a higher mark in your SAC or exam?  Include in your Body Paragraphs the Message of the Author that links directly to the essay prompt.

Why include Message of Author?

In your essay you are going beyond the literal [factual] meaning of the words in the text to find significant and unstated meanings of authors.  Essentially you are examining how the author:

  1. Sees something: their views ie. his/her opinion, perspective, way of thinking, impression or observation.
  2. Thinks about something: their values ie. his/her principles, morals, ethics or standards.
  3. Ways the author uses to construct the text.

As you construct your essay, based on the prompt, you need to determine what the author thinks about the issue and how they discuss their viewpoint in the text.

Look at this essay structure where the prompt is answered clearly:

Prompt:  “Burial Rites depicts a society in which power and strength are valued more than compassion and love”.

Body Paragraph 1 = Cause of power & strength of Icelandic society

Body Paragraph 2 = Response of individuals

Body Paragraph 3 = Consequence of why love and compassion is important to society

Message of Author is colour coded 

Introduction / Message of Author

On face value 19th century Icelandic society represented in Hannah Kent’s historical novel Burial Rites does endorse power and strength over compassion and love.  The text depicts a harsh patriarchal society that is reflected in the severe, intolerant nature of the law and social structure it serves.  In such a society, it is not uncommon for the poor and weak to be strongly disadvantaged and women to have little power relative to men.  While power and strength may dominate in the wider community, the text also emphasizes the profound effect that storytelling has on individuals, eliciting empathy and understanding thus making a difference to those around them.  Kent illustrates that the power of stories can surpass the prejudice ingrained in people, bringing comfort and love to even a brutal world, displaying how love and compassion are almost necessary in any society.

 BP1 Cause = Main Contention / The harsh patriarchal society of Iceland depicted in the novel not only favours an intolerant and brutal judicial system but it also uses violence against the poor and disadvantaged as an instrument of power by its administrators.

BP1 Message of Author / Consequently Kent highlights in 19th century Icelandic society the poor and women are strongly disadvantaged with little power relative to men.

 BP2 Response = Main Contention / While power and strength may dominate in the wider community; the text also emphasises the profound effect that storytelling has on individuals whose Christian values of love are embedded in their culture.

BP2 Message of Author / Kent illustrates that the power of stories can surpass the prejudice ingrained in people, bringing comfort and love to even a brutal world

 BP3 Consequence = Main Contention / The text promulgates that displaying love and compassion are necessary to any society

BP3 Message of Author / The text illustrates that compassion and love shown at the end of the novel are more powerful than power and strength as Toti, Margret and the family learn to see Agnes as a person ensuring her memory is not lost.

Conclusion / Message of Author

In the main, Burial Rites depicts a harsh society where the strong exercise power over the weak and there is little room for kindness or sympathy.  However, Kent highlights that there are individuals in the text whose compassion and love for their fellow Icelanders offset the brutality of the context in which they live.  This is particularly evident in the way that through the power of story-telling Agnes allows Toti, Margret and the family at Kornsa into her life’s narrative and the result is their love and compassion make a real difference to Agnes before she dies.

VCE English Year 12 Exam Advice

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The VCE English Year 12 Exam

The VCE English year 12 exam is a 3 hour exam divided into 3 sections covering Section A: Analytical interpretation of a text, Section B: Comparative analysis of texts and Section C: Argument and persuasive language.

The First 15 Minutes is Reading Time

The first 15 minutes of the exam is dedicated to reading time and you are not allowed to write anything during this time.  Look at Section A and Section B prompts for your specific texts and mentally pick a prompt that you know you can answer.  Then move on quickly to Section C.  Firstly, read the background box on the front page that gives you the information about the articles, then read the language analysis article or articles and visual texts.  Use this time to annotate in your mind what is the main contention of each writer, what are their arguments, identify the persuasive techniques used, tone and appeals and if the visual texts endorses the article or opposes it.

Section C: Argument and Persuasive Language Analysis

As soon as the 15 minutes reading time is up, go straight to Section C: Language Analysis and prepare to briefly annotate the texts.  Read over the articles again while annotating the texts and be careful with your time, allow yourself 3-5 minutes only with annotations but make sure you identify the arguments.

Remember Argument and Persuasive Language is for you to identity:

What is being argued?  How it is being argued?  Why it is being argued in that particular way?  The Intended Effect on readers/audience.

Then get straight into writing your analysis.  Be careful that you DO NOT write your opinion about the topic.  You are analysing what THE AUTHOR thinks, his argument, not yours.  Don’t forget how important his argument and persuasive techniques are to POSITION the READERS / THE INTENDED EFFECT.

Be concise with your analysis

Stick to the arguments and do not respond with too much detail or long-winded quotes from the articles.  If you want to include quotes about the language identify how the language works and be specific about its intended effect on the reader.

Section A – Analytical interpretation of a text & Section B – Comparative analysis of texts

Make sure your Introductions are clearly answering the prompt question with a Main Contention, Topic Sentences that develop the argument and the Message of the Author. Conclusions are important for you to give your final insight into the question and reiterate what the author’s legacy is in regards to the discussion your essay outlines.

Timing During the Exam

Remember that the English exam is 3 hours, but out of that time 15 minutes is reading time.  Divide your time carefully between the 3 sections in the exam and stick to it.  I suggest that you allow yourself 50 minutes to write each essay. Try to give yourself about 3-5 minutes at the end to proof read and check spelling.

If you find that your 50 minutes is up and you are still writing one of the essays, then to conclude just use dot points.  At least the assessors will know where your essay was headed at the end rather than a blank page with absolutely no conclusion. The assessors are really good but definitely they are not mind readers so at least give them something to read instead of nothing.

If you have time at the end of the exam in the 5 minutes left, go back to those dot points you did not finish and see if you can make them into sentences that are more cohesive.

 Practice Past Exam Papers

Check the VCAA site for Past Exams and the Reports that assessors give their advice on Sections A, B and Section C.  Look at the language analysis in those previous exams and use them as your practice analysis pieces, noting carefully the assessors comments.

Don’t Stress, Believe in Yourself, Revise Carefully

You have worked all year towards this exam along with your other subjects and the best advice I can give you is to not stress.  Believe in your own abilities. For the remaining time before the exam focus on revising carefully by brainstorming plans that will answer the prompts. Write full Introductions clearly outlining your Main Contention, Topic Sentences and Message of Author .  Learn quotes related to themes and characters that will be used as your evidence in essays.  Make sure when revising your analytical interpretation of texts and comparative analysis of texts that you know clearly THE MESSAGE OF THE AUTHORS in context of the ‘world of the text’.  Practice language analysis articles from past exams.

Good Luck for the Year 12 English Exam

I send all my very best wishes to every student sitting VCE Year 12 English.   In particular, good luck to every one of the VCE Year 12 students I have tutored.  It has been a privilege to teach you.